User talk:Metalfoam

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Hello, Metalfoam, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on discussion pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! Wizard191 (talk) 16:01, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
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Hi Metal, I have replied to your request for feedback at Requests for feedback/2011 May 27. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:10, 27 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Hi Crisco, thanks for your feedback. I have followed your suggestions and modified the articles. I realized my non-neutral tone in the earlier version of this article, and now I have modified the article. I also took care of the inline citation issue; placed citations where it is most appropriate. I already had many internal Wiki links before, plus I added more now. I also followed the Wiki format for the text. I hope now it is acceptable. I am sure later other editors will contribute significantly and add more valuable information to this article.Metalfoam (talk) 13:04, 17 June 2011 (UTC)