User talk:Metro Brokers

I am new to this and I am not sure exactly what I am doing entirely as I am trying to mimic http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/RE/MAX as we are both in the same Industry and both located in Denver, CO. What have I done differently than they have?

Metro Brokers (talk) 18:47, 11 December 2008 (UTC)Scott

Yours reads like an advert - 'our' is not encyclopaedic but frequently found in adverts, for example. They don't start with their address like in a business letter. I've only just looked at their article, and while I'm not too sure about the notability, it is written in an encyclopaedic manner. Have another look at it. Peridon (talk) 19:24, 11 December 2008 (UTC)