User talk:Mevm21/sandbox

Peer Review - Chris Mikos
The statements you are adding seem good and unbiased and the references are relevant with active links. My only suggestion is to include where in the original article, these statements will actually go. While the additions seem relevant, without the location of where they will be added, its hard to tell if they will fit into the original article.
 * Thank you Chris for your feedback. I didn't know we were suppose to write where we would be adding our edits, but I am happy to tell you now. The first point will go in the career section where they mention Prieto. The second point will no longer be added, it seems that someone has already added it. The third point will be added to the career section after the paragraph that mentions Prieto since it seems that they are adding things Yosimar has done by chronological order. The fourth point will be added to the early life and education section, after the first paragraph. Lastly, the point where it says that he identifies as queer and came to Northeastern, will be added to the lead paragraph. Let me know what you think. (Mevm21 (talk) 04:20, 28 November 2018 (UTC))