User talk:Meyeraz/sandbox

I could not reach your sandbox in order to make a peer review. It says that there is nothing currently available.

I think you have a very nice foundation for your article. Overall, the research found and your sources are very good. I recommend continuing to find more diverse sources to build a stronger layer of information to support the article. In addition, I found that it needed a little more organization. One of the things that wikipedia pages do very well is organize the information so readers can easily find what they were looking for. Other than that I think you are on the right track! Wnicolai33 (talk) 02:05, 24 October 2018 (UTC)