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Big game fishing

Find picture source cccommons Zane grey History information information about the fish

1. Change section headings to make it more organized 2. Try to eliminate some useless information in boats 3. relink sources and check that they are scholarly — Preceding unsigned comment added by Meyerhk (talk • contribs) 13:20, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
1. The lead for this article seems weak, it doesn't really point out to me where the importance is or what is the most important. 2. In the "Boats" section it could use subheadings for the part that says the different types of boats. It would make it much easier for the reader if there were subheadings here to differentiate the types of boats. In the location section I think the part about land based fishing is out of place. In the sections before they are talking about locations then it just throws in this little bit about a type of the game fishing. 3. There is so much on boats... just take a look at that. You could change the location of the Fighting the fish section, make it its own section. Add more to bait fishing if possible. If there are any more game species you can find definitely add those to make the species portion longer. Add a part for gear used. Add more on the history about the development of catching fish and how people always wanted to catch a bigger fish so they sought big game fishing. 4. This article is neutral, it's hard to have a skewed opinion or writing on something that is an objective sport. 5. I would check the sources, I'm not sure if they would be considered academic articles but I don't think they would be a bad source either, just take a look at them. PaulrdUC (talk) 15:04, 29 October 2018 (UTC)