User talk:Meysarah/sandbox

Peer Edit
Your article looks great. You used a variety of reliable sources to provide information, with a clear structure to follow. It appears unbiased and educational to the audience reading. I agree that it would be beneficial to add the effect(s) insects have on the world as a whole. Other than that, I would simply aid to a few minor grammatical changes and it'll be perfect! Leeza.decheubel (talk) 20:17, 15 November 2016 (UTC)Leeza

Draft Feedback
Meysarah, you have gotten off to a good start with this article draft. You have included good information that is well-referenced, you have good organization within your article addition, and your writing is mostly clear.

As I look between the current article and the information that you plan to add to this article, however, I am curious about how you will integrate your information with what is currently in the article. It seems that the article as a whole could benefit from perhaps a couple of sub-sections. You could put your information, for example, under sub-sections titled perhaps "Ecosystem Niches," "Ecosystem roles," and "Importance of insects to humans". If you did add sub-headers, it looks like some information in the article currently would need to be moved under those sub-sections. In summary, I suggest focusing most of your efforts on overall organization of the article, as well as in thinking more about what would be helpful sub-section headers to have in this article. Rhirshorn (talk) 23:36, 20 November 2016 (UTC)