User talk:Mfigueroa12

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AV block
You selected a page I've been meaning to improve. I'll let you know the first thing I was going to add: a concise description of the normal physiology that is available to general readers. This is an article that has vast room for improvement and is of intterest to a large number of people. I'll leave the article to you during the course, but feel to ask me questions. BiologicalMe (talk) 23:09, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Hello! I assigned myself to peer edit AV Block. Your addition about the three degrees of AV block was a helpful addition of pertinent information. I have a few suggestions for improvement. First, there were a few places where grammar could be improved. The sentence that starts with "This degree, is typically asymptomatic..." would flow better without the comma. The sentence "Second-Degree AV block, although typically asymptomatic, there are early signs that can be dictated or are noticeable such as irregular heartbeat or a syncope." isn't quite grammatically correct, and needs to be reworded. Secondly, I think the structure of the article could be modified for easier reading. There aren't any headers or anything really dividing up the article, and I think there's enough information there to divide it up and make it easier to find the right information. Lastly, I think there could always be more citations. Specifically, the last sentence of the second paragraph starting with "Strong vagal stimulation" is not cited and doesn't seem like a complete statement. Overall, it looks great with lots of room to improve. Hope this helps! Tchristensen28 (talk)