User talk:Mfiligra/sandbox


 * what's going on?Mfiligra (talk) 03:40, 31 August 2017 (UTC)Mfiligra (talk) 19:37, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Vik's Peer Review -- 19-665
Overall, I think your draft is very good! One thing I would recommend is adding more information about existing charging stations and what the government hopes to do after the initial $25 million investment in charging stations. Also, what role is power generation going to play in the PHEV market in Mexico? Will the proliferation of renewable energy sources drive power prices down to make it more economical to have a PHEV? And when will it be possible for electric vehicle drivers to travel all over the country? I would also add information about how successful the subsidy programs you mention have been after their implementation.

Avatarfanx2 (talk) 21:14, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Henry's Peer Review
Overall, its a solid draft. One thing that can be improved is the sources for the first section. It relies heavily on a single source, so it could be beneficial to see if other publications back up these claims. Additionally, in the seccond part, I would change the word demographically to describe the city's growth. I think you're referring to a population increase, but I'm unsure. But overall, good job. Hhausman (talk) 23:27, 14 April 2018 (UTC)