User talk:Mfox03

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Hello, Mfox03, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Nice work on your draft. I would recommend a few changes

Simplify statements like this. Simple, spare prose it better

You might combine the "risks" and "consequences" sections into one. Maybe "Risks and benefits". Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:25, 29 November 2017 (UTC)