User talk:Mg9901/History of radio

The article I have chosen is currently pretty good in it's approach to discussing the history of radio. It is neutrally written, most claims have solid citations with the exception of a couple of red citations, but the article does have some unrelated information as there is section dedicated to some of the history of color television but the subject is the history of radio. I also feel some sections are a little underdeveloped such as the digital era section and the radio navigation section which is why I'm excited to work on this article there is stuff I feel I can improve the page on.

The main feedback I have received in my talk page is to propose my changes in a talk page before putting it back into the main article. I will have to continue to tweak some things, and there is one or two citations that seem to have constant issues that aren't very easily fixed. I will respond by most likely post my changes to Fountains of Bryn Mawr talk page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mg9901 (talk • contribs) 00:41, 6 December 2021 (UTC)