User talk:Mgriggs3/sandbox

Drosophila group

Make sure that the article is organized and also put in order according the professors list. You also need to make sure that all of the sections are finished and that the authors names are removed. You need to make sure that each section heading is labeled and is larger than the normal writing.

Lead section- 2 because it has too much information and goes to in depth to the information. Content- 12 or 13 because you have topics that are missing life fertilization and also other topics that need to be more in depth and more information added. Style- 1 or 1.5 because there isn't a title, the section headings need to be bolded and be easier to be seen and the information needs to be more balanced across the sections. Citations- 3 because you have good citations, but they are not all organized into the same location.

Talk: Chick development citations
Citations

Mgriggs3 (talk) 04:31, 14 March 2018 (UTC)