User talk:Mgt10196/sandbox

M's Peer Review
M is editing/rewriting the article on wikipedia entitled "Decentralization." So far, he has rewritten the first paragraph of the article. I agree with his choice to edit out the second and third sentences of the paragraph, which state that there is no single, agreed-upon definition of decentralization because of the many applications of the word. The fourth sentence, which M kept, describes how the concept has been applied to discussions of various subjects. It is obvious from the fourth sentence that there is no single definition or application of the concept, so the second and third sentences in this paragraph are redundant. M rewrote the first sentence of the paragraph. His first sentence, for the most part, completely restates the first sentence of the article in his own words. However, M changes only changes "a central location or authority" to "a central, authoritative location or group." I would suggest he use different words, so he avoids the risk of plagiarism. M is doing a good job. I look forward to reading more of his words.