User talk:Mh9455a

Kogod School of Business
Hi there. I'm a little concerned about some of the edits you've made to the Kogod School of Business article. The large content you've added reads very much like an advertisement or promotional leaflet, so I've removed it again. Firstly, can you ensure that it's not copied and pasted from another site, and if not, perhaps you could reword it so that it's less informal and more encyclopedic-sounding? Thanks much! KaySL talk 19:00, 20 September 2010 (UTC)