User talk:Miabertalan

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Miabertalan! Thank you for your contributions. I am David FLXD and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Questions or type at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: You may already know this, but I should mention that when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes ( ~ ); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian!  David_FLXD  (Talk) 03:37, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Chameleon vision, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  David_FLXD  (Talk) 03:43, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
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Amazing for a first article! However, it still needs improvement in two areas:
 * "Wikifying": the process of integrating an article into Wikipedia's style and, more especially, other content. Have a look at my edit on your accepted article, tagged as "Started Wikifying" (view page history, select "prev" and compare highlighted changes made to the text), where I have begun this process in the first and second paragraphs. Normally only the first mention of a term is wikilinked.
 * Language: Your language is exemplary - but perhaps not that accessible to a less educated reader. I would really appreciate it if you would run through the article and look for examples like this: In your second paragraph you have "chameleons utilize a method of monocular focusing..."; why not amend it to "chameleons use a method of monocular focusing..." which means just about the same thing and is easier to understand? I'm sure you get the idea.

A picture of a chameleon's eye would be nice, although the copyright protections make accepting non-public domain images difficult. If you need advice in this regard please feel free to ask me how to go about it.  David_FLXD  (Talk) 04:04, 20 December 2012 (UTC)