User talk:Mialejeune/Aboriginal whaling

This is great work so far and it focuses on straight facts and has a good mix between positive and negative information. IBalart (talk) 21:57, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Great work, looks like a Wikipedia article to me. You probably don't need all the citations after ever sentence but it's understandable why you did it. One citation at the end is enough. Especially when it comes to a paragraph where you just use one citation. TSTUMMVOLL (talk) 21:53, 30 March 2021 (UTC)

This is great! I think it will make a really good addition to the Lembata wiki page, especially because whaling is mentioned but the history is not expanded upon. the links to other wiki articles are also great! NatalieMoun (talk) 22:00, 30 March 2021 (UTC)

This is very well-written and quite comprehensive. As you further enlarge it, I would suggest adding something on environmental & political debates surrounding the Lamalera hunt, if there are any. That way you don't only focus on the cultural & material practices of the tribes. You should also think hard about where to put this material. The Aboriginal whaling page already has a pretty extensive section talking about the Lamalera/Lamakera. Are you aiming to replace that, or augment it? Might this material fit better on another page? That's something to consider. Brendankarch (talk) 18:36, 31 March 2021 (UTC)