User talk:Mianina0

Nice work!
Posted automatically via sandbox guided tour. Mianina0 (talk) 15:31, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

A kitten for you!
--Saguaromelee (talk) 16:02, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Mianina0, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Article for class
Hi Mianina0,

I was reviewing your article choice for editing in class. I think you have made a good choice for a topic. There seems to be some information on the page, but it is not very expanded on. Additionally, there seem to be quite a few journal articles that mention the syndrome, so you should have an easy time of researching that component. It might be more difficult to find a book on the topic...which will be a fun challenge that we can help with in class. I will be interested to hear more about how you might add to this article! Saguaromelee (talk) 19:50, 17 September 2015 (UTC)

Explaining the process
I thought that this is a very information-packed article, but it has been well organized and does a good job of explaining how Ogden Syndrome works. However, at the end of the article, about the Molecular Genetics, the article is a little dry and does need some explanations for some of the genes that are involved and why they are needed in the body to function. For example, the "mutation in an enzyme involved in N-terminal acetylation" does require some background knowledge for those who might not know why this process occurred or why it it is needed for someone to function on a daily basis. MassBlade (talk) 15:45, 16 October 2015 (UTC)