User talk:Micdes90/sandbox

Hey Michael,

I think this is a great topic and I actually did some edits for you (I didn't know this was where we were suppose to make comments). You will notice that I added an entire section that I think is quite essential for Think&EatGreen@School. If you have perhaps a more in-depth concluding section discussing methods taken so far and example projects students are working on, it will make the page that much better. But really awesome topic - one of my favourite UBC programs going on at the moment!

-- Anita Balakumar — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anibala777 (talk • contribs) 05:13, 1 March 2013 (UTC)

See below for Benjamin's (biol345wiki) comment:

Think and Eat Green @ School Perhaps use the heading function to make the font larger These concrete school projects involve collaborative learning amongst a multitude of players, from university students and researchers, health and educational institutions to a network of community‐based and community‐supported non‐ profit organizations working on food, health, and the environment, linking farms to schools, city dwellers with farmers, school cooks with successful green chefs, restaurateurs, restaurant designers, gardeners, school authorities, teachers and students. This sentence is slightly long! The project enables students, teachers, and policy makers to influence how their food is produced and where it comes from, through concrete school projects in areas of: How does it enable them to do so (i.e. public meetings, funding, providing space on campus, etc) Think&EatGreen@School integrates 6 primary concepts in order to encompass the overarching notions of food security and food citizenship. What is food security and food citizenship? Very informative, but the scope of the project could be made clearer. Is it UBC's project? Most of the page is bullet points, which makes it very concise, but maybe consider paragraph form to make it more accessible and readable — Preceding unsigned comment added by Biol345wiki (talk • contribs) 18:43, 5 March 2013 (UTC)