User talk:Michael.C.Wright/Archive 1

Your submission at Articles for creation: S795 coffee (January 24)
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Onel5969 (talk) 17:00, 24 January 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: S795 coffee (February 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sam Sailor was:

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-- Sam Sailor Talk! 16:36, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

Talkback
-- Sam Sailor Talk! 07:35, 27 February 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: S795 coffee has been accepted
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Ways to improve World Coffee Producers Forum
Hi, I'm AmericanAir88. Michael.C.Wright, thanks for creating World Coffee Producers Forum!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Talk more generally about the organization. Try to avoid bias statements

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

AmericanAir88 (talk) 19:39, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

Addressing Issues
Hello, Thank you for taking the time to respond. You cannot believe how many users do not even address issues, so I thank you so much.

Bias statements tend to show when you get deep into a companies history using primary sourcing or conversation like words.

The paragraph "The main focus of the forum was to analyze the challenges faced by the value chain, including "farmers' economic sustainability, productivity, price volatility, the next generation of coffee growers, the consequences of climate change, how to keep the quality and traceability for an every day more and more discerning and informed consumer and an increasing demand of 50 million bags in the next 10 to 15 years, among others." is taken from the organizations website(primary source) and gives off a promotional tone. It sounds like the article is trying to promote the organization.

The 2017 section is important to the article but contains no sourcing. Leave specific events in one section and talk more about what the organization does (while being neutral) and its impact on society.

Check out WP:NOTADVERTISING for more details. If you need any more info, just ask. I am going to help you with this. I am currently editing now.

Thank you AmericanAir88 (talk) 01:24, 26 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Update: I have sourced and expanded the article.

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