User talk:Michael3468/Biological dispersal

peer review
I did a peer review on this draft thus far. Great work and keep it up :D! Moose1917 (talk) 03:52, 19 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you so much for your detailed peer review. We will definitely look into adjusting the organization of the writing in the lead as it will make our edits more easily understood with respect to all of the details present in the article. Likewise, we look to improve on the tone and balance of the article as it would allow the article to present all possible viewpoints and ideas on the topic.
 * Best,
 * Michael3468 (talk) 14:41, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

peer review
Hi! I just did a peer review of your draft. Doing good work, but please include the sources for sections that are missing it. Can't wait to see how great it is going to turn out. Good luck!Octobercosmos (talk) 16:45, 19 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello! Thank you so much for your peer review. With regards to the content, in the actual article it would be put into the respective sections into which the information closely aligns. We apologize as that was not stated in the sandbox, thus makes the edits a little disorganized. We will work to make certain that current and future edits location is more clear. Likewise, we will work to back more of our information with reliable/in depth sources to make certain that all of the information being presented is correct and follows wikipedia guidelines.
 * Best,
 * Michael3468 (talk) 15:40, 23 October 2023 (UTC)