User talk:MichaelMarcucciWVU/String band/Melisa Nur Temiz Peer Review

It is so nice for you to break down your article in certain categories. It makes your article seem more clear structured. Frankly, since this is an article that has not been fully completed yet it will not be correct to say some sections are short. But you include the resources which is good. Right now it seems so short but the information he has given so far is fine. And also, I am working on the Appalachian music which is similar so I will use some information in your article to expand mine. It will fit well. To improve your article, I would check some of your spelling to make sure it's correct. The footnotes that you include are nice to see in your work.Melisa Nur Temiz (talk) 23:27, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

I think you did an excellent job breaking down the article into the different parts. Another thing I noticed is that you used a lot of hyperlinks which was another really good idea. The last section is a little short for the festivals but I figured it just wasn't completed yet. You do a really good job explaining Appalachia Music and the ways it was used. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MichaelMarcucciWVU (talk • contribs) 15:24, 12 March 2021 (UTC)