User talk:MichaelShun

Welcome!
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cosumnes_River_Preserve

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Outline feedback
Hi Mike,

Your outline plan sounds good but it need a little more structure. What are the sections that you're going to add or modify? Also, you'll want to put all your editing into a "new section" on the talk page to demarcate what you're working on. Otherwise it looks good and I look forward to reading it!

Julianfulton (talk) 20:16, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi Mike! You did a really good job on talking about volunteer work and restoration work. I'd like to hear more about plant and animals! :)

Emilywilkinson (talk) 21:29, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

Outline Feedback - Emily
Thank you for your insight and feedback on how to improve the Cosumnes River Preserve page. I will go ahead and add more about the plant and animal species that you can find on the preserve and maybe go a little into the habitats that you can find them in within the preserve.