User talk:Michaelazanni/sandbox/draft

Your first reference doesn't work to click on but they all are credible so just fix that. And you don't have any citations for any of your bullet points-need them

I like that all the information is straight to the point but the only thing I would say is possibly adding an advantage of reliance authorization section since you already have a disadvantage section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chrisp24 (talk • contribs) 12:48, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

The draft is clear, but it lacks clear intext citations, I can't tell where you got the information, which source you used and so forth. Also, make your refences clear, because one of them is unreachable.