User talk:Michaelblawler

In the article, "Pepin of Landen," the first section contains the following extract:

"...he retired (or was retired) to his estates, where he remained for the next decade, until Dagobert's death. (Next paragraph) On his death, Pepin came out of retirement to take on the mayoralty in Austrasia..."

The sentence, beginning with "On his death, Pepin came out of retirement" makes no grammatical sense within the context of the sentence, despite the reference to Dagoberts' death in the prior paragraph.

Thus I believe the following change should be made: Incorrect phrase: "On his death, Pepin came out of retirement..." Correct phrase: "On Dabobert's death, Pepin came out of retirement..."

Perhaps a person with an academic degree in English could confirm the proper phrase.