User talk:Michaelhav1/sandbox

Review
Hi Michael! You have great information for the early history of scapegoating in Ancient Greece. It might be helpful to review some of the information you have and toss what isn't the most important/relevant, and also include your source link so that you don't lose where you pulled your information from. I noticed that you have different information for the different practices of different locations of Greece, which may be slightly confusing without proper introduction and organization within the section. I would also recommend finding information regarding scapegoat in ancient Syria, so that your sections aren't unbalanced with information (i.e Ancient Greece being larger than Ancient Syria). Great Job! Isabelvillela (talk) 20:01, 19 October 2018 (UTC)Isabel Villela

Peer Review from Josie
Hi Michael, You have found great information! Referred was spelled incorrectly at the beginning, so just make sure before we post these on live pages to double check spelling errors. Also, you can definitely narrow down your wordiness to be more concise and to the point. Overall, very good! ColorMyPencils (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 06:44, 20 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review from Kumale
Hey Michael! I think you're bringing great information to the article and giving the reader a better idea of the concept of the scapegoat. Your addition to the article does a good job of further expanding on the concept and relating it to similar practices in Ancient Greece. You also provided sold examples and references. Other than some spelling and punctuation errors, great job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by KumaleFufa (talk • contribs) 17:18, 23 October 2018 (UTC)