User talk:Michaellin

Thanks for the added information on Olin School of Business. This will count for Assignment 3 (the minor edit.) If you would like this to also count for Assignment 4 (the significant contribution) please expande this section with more details and information.

You've picked a good page to work on because there is a lot of information on Washington University, but there was nothing on your school (Olin.) Please either add to this section or you can also choose another page to which you will make a significant contribution. Please see http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaisersanders/ELP127 to review the instructions or contact me if you have any questions.


 * DJKS 14:49, 19 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Olin Entry
Your entry for Olin School of Business is excellent in length. My concern is that the language seems like a combination of text found in published material and your own writing. Parts are very well formed, while other sentences need revision to correct grammar and clarity. Please go back through this section and revise to make the language all flow.


 * DJKS 14:02, 28 Jul 2004 (UTC)

SLAM
Thanks for all your work on the SLAM page. It's looking better and better. Just remember to make all the writing consistent in style and grammar usage.


 * DJKS 14:07, 28 Jul 2004 (UTC)