User talk:Michaelmm99/Choreography

Peer Review
Hello I see you posted your draft live and it was reverted https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Choreography&oldid=1216960749 for reference. I enjoy the essay and your experiences with choreography from the legally blonde rehearsals along with the choreography experience you had at Newark tech, but for the Wikipedia project it is required that the content be opinionless and only contribute information relevant to choreography as a topic. You have a good initial starting point just have to adhere to the guidelines. Keep up the good work. Walrusedit (talk) 20:14, 4 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Good evening Yves, I just read your article draft and it is every organized https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Walrusedit/Prop with the images showing the creation of props sections. I really like how well researched. Clearly explained your manuscript is. The way you delve into the origins of the term "props" and how it has changed over time is both informative and captivating. Also incorporating quotes, from industry experts like Properties Director Bland Wade adds credibility and depth to your analysis.
 * Great job! I love how you took your time doing your work. You had attentive details and dedication, to exploring the intricacies of theater and film production practices is admirable. I encourage you to keep delving into this subject as your insights have the potential to enhance our understanding of the processes involved in visual storytelling. Michaelmm99 (talk) 04:03, 5 April 2024 (UTC)