User talk:Michafrasher/sandbox

After reading your page, there are only a few things that could be updated. When citing the sources at the end of a sentence, I suggest putting them in parentheses to avoid confusion. There could be a little more detail when talking about her college career and possibly more about her career in coaching. I find it very interesting that she was able to do all of these things while having a child at a young age. When actually writing your page, I suggest using a new line for the awards she received as it separates them better. (I know the sandbox doesn't allow you to do that because I tried it myself). Overall, you have really good information and I learned a lot about her and her career as a professional athlete.