User talk:MicheleMcilveen

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Hello, MicheleMcilveen, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome!  W a g g e r s  TALK  09:26, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
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Thanks for your efforts to improve the above article. I think the previous iteration of the article portrayed the subject in an overly negative light, placing undue weight on the troublesome first few months, and your edits have restored the balance somewhat; although please be careful not to overdo it! On Wikipedia we always strive to report things form a neutral point of view and to keep the language encyclopaedic in tone (so talk of "amazing" exam results doesn't really fit well). I notice that you also removed several references in your edits as well, which is usually heavily frowned upon. I've restored the relevant ones (some of the previous references are probably surplus to requirements) and some of your new material needs some additional citations. Please see WP:CITE for more information on how to do this.

Welcome to the project, and please don't hesitate to leave a message on my talk page if I can help in any way.  W a g g e r s  TALK  09:32, 28 January 2013 (UTC)