User talk:Michellewolford/sandbox

Michelle Feedback: •	What exactly is her thesis and how did it contribute to her field of study? •	Why is only the research heading bolded? •	Maybe the notable publications is a lot? o	Maybe not though you probably can’t have too much •	Can you add a picture? •	The citations check out •	Overall it is very nice

Becca's comments
early life and education - remove "Nine years later" or "in 2006" What does "further her field of studies" mean? Instead discuss some of the contributions her dissertation made to her field

career remove "graduate research instructor for two classes"

research change "including their impacts on" to " in particular as related to " Combine sentences 2 and 3

Notable Publications - maybe a few too many. Provide the citation information in the list

Awards & Leadership change "the" before "National Science Foundation CAREER" to "a"

Public Engagement the grant is 1.1 million not billion — Preceding unsigned comment added by Waterbarnes (talk • contribs) 22:03, 10 November 2018 (UTC)