User talk:Mickeymaitre/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
You were late with one of the tutorials, but otherwise good job on your first assignment. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:39, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
Your sandbox is rather disorganized. It took me a while to figure out what is what. However, your sources do look relevant and reputable. Go ahead and add them to the article within the next week. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:50, 3 March 2018 (UTC)


 * I see you added the sources. Authors' names shouldn't be in all-caps (notice how the other sources are formatted), but other than that, good job. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 18:29, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead
I'm afraid someone has recently added a lead to "Corruption in Finland." You should find another article as soon as possible. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:50, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * "Sociality and disease transmission" is a great article to work on. You should delete the first two sentences of your lead. Keep in mind that the topic of this article is very narrowly defined, and more general information about disease transmission can be found elsewhere. Instead, you should add some more specifics at the end, provided that the article contains them. For example, how specifically do large groups try to prevent the spread of infections? Josef Horáček (talk) 04:25, 23 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Some of your phrasing is awkward, but the lead improved the article. You're done with this assignment! Josef Horáček (talk) 00:03, 29 April 2018 (UTC)