User talk:Mihailooo02/LGBT history in Serbia

Your draft so far is great. I liked that is well detailed and you provided multiple citations which is what helped strengthen your page greatly. You were overall about to really support your page greatly with the evidence you provided. I think you also do a very good job of introducing the topic like when you talked about the sources of insight involving homosexuality and the questionnaires. You explain it very simply but also went into great detail in order for your audience to understand. The only small issue is your resources I think you need 1 or 2 more in order to meet the criteria of the project. But overall I have nothing negative to say so far I think you're doing very well on your page so far. Great job, your topic is very interesting can't wait to read more. -LP

Your draft is extremely detailed with very few sources which means you got a good amount of information out of those sources. The only issue I see with having such few sources is you currently have only 4 sources, but need 5 for the final project. So that is something to make sure you have for the final. I don't know if this will be an issue when you go to actually cite your sources in Wikipedia, hopefully a link will generate. I was not able to find any information about your first source on Google, hopefully that is an error on my end. I could find and confirm your other sources were relevant. Your draft also focuses strictly on facts and doesn't seem biased towards one side which is great. From the topics that you are writing about, you do not over or underrepresent any points which is a plus. You have done a great job, and should keep working the same way as you move towards the final draft. Ahaas2 (talk) 02:55, 18 November 2020 (UTC)AH