User talk:Mikaela20/Oak St.

Peer reviewed your article! Jerrial (talk) 07:50, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Jerrial

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It looks like you have a good sense of the direction the article is going in. The structure works and while your paragraphs are all much to terse now, they can be added to and expanded. Remember to slow down and explain the things you refer to; don't just race past them.

You're currently failing to cite your sources and even in a draft, that's unacceptable.

You also want to watch the tone of your writing. The short paragraph under Shops and Venues needs only minor changes. Right now, it's biased because of the language you use. Compare these two examples: "Each block is flourishing with small businesses" and "On each block are a number of small, local businesses".

JT: (talk) 16:37, 10 March 2021 (UTC)