User talk:Mike.yuxuan/sandbox

This seems to be more complete and more on-target than the single paragraph in Serena's sandbox (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Serenawsli/English_as_a_Second_Language_for_Cantonese_Heritage_Speakers). Are you sure that is where I should be looking?

For the draft in Mike's sandbox, I have these comments:

Add section headers indicating which info relates to each aspect of Ethnolinguistic Vitality. You have some good starting information, but it's not yet well-organized like a Wikipedia article.

Check verb tenses and accuracy in 1st paragraph (relating to HK's return to China).

This version does not appear to be organized around the Ethnolinguistic Vitality model.

Naomi TBB199 (talk) 18:38, 11 February 2016 (UTC)

Oh!! I just found the longer more complete version on Serena's page. So don't worry about these comments. Naomi TBB199 (talk) 18:45, 11 February 2016 (UTC)