User talk:MikeKelly

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Hello, MikeKelly, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Mistawasis (January 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by WikiDan61 was:

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WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 21:16, 24 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mistawasis (January 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Curb Safe Charmer was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Mistawasis and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Mistawasis, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Mistawasis Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Curb_Safe_Charmer&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Mistawasis reviewer's talk page].
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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 22:33, 24 January 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Mistawasis has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Mistawasis. Thanks! WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 15:07, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mistawasis has been accepted
 Mistawasis, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 15:27, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
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Hi Mike!

I decided to peer-review your article. Great work so far! You've got a great basis for your article, and seem to have all your ducks in a row in terms of the structure of the argument, which is awesome to see. Here's a list of a couple of things that I noticed that you could improve.
 * You should include a hyperlink to Treaty 6, or at least explain a little bit about what it is.
 * There seems to be a bit of a disconnect between your third line and your fourth line. I can't put my finger on exactly what it is, but you should reword it a little to make it a bit clearer - that might help a bit.
 * Like I mentioned above regarding the hyperlink, you should include more of those. By linking your article together with other ones, it helps to make the article seem more professional and "encyclopedic", to use a word from the assignment instructions.

Other than that, there isn't much more that I can see. Great work so far! Keep it up and you're going to have a great article. James.Gough.93 (talk) 04:27, 15 February 2018 (UTC)