User talk:MikeOwen/Archive 1

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (March 20)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KGirlTrucker81 was:

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KGirlTrucker81 huh? what I've been doing 13:21, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

My Reply
Dear KGirlTrucker81,

Thank you very much for your feedback. I have taken heed of your feedback and my first wikepedia page has been accepted!

Yours very gratefully,

Pianoguysfan (talk) 16:57, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission, Uncharted (album)
I've approved your submission and moved it to the mainspace. Happy editing, Kevin12xd 23:41, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

My Reply
Dear Kevin12,

Thanks!

Pianoguysfan (talk) 16:50, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Welcome!
Welcome to Wikipedia, Pianoguysfan! Thank you for your contributions. I am Mz7 and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Questions or type at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes ( ~ ); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Mz7 (talk) 04:37, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
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My Reply
Dear Mz7,

Thank you very much!

Pianoguysfan (talk) 16:50, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

April 2017
Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Jon Schmidt, from its old location at User:Pianoguysfan/sandbox. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. KGirlTrucker81 huh? what I've been doing 15:08, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

My Reply
Dear KGirlTrucker81

Thank you!

Pianoguysfan (talk) 16:53, 3 April 2017 (UTC)
 * KGirlTrucker81 huh? what I've been doing 16:59, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Jon Schmidt has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jon Schmidt. Thanks! M assiveYR  ♠  19:31, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jon Schmidt (April 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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SwisterTwister  talk  20:31, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

My Reply
Dear SwisterTwister,

Thank you for your feedback. I will do my best to get it right next time.

Pianoguysfan (talk) 07:12, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jon Schmidt (May 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mz7 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Mz7 (talk) 05:11, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

My Reply
Dear Mz7,

Thanks! On Jon Schmidt's bio here on the Piano Guys website, it says he has won awards during his solo career, but I can't find any articles citing the awards he has won. What do you recommend me to do?

Pianoguysfan talktome 17:49, 1 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Hi Pianoguysfan! Ultimately, reliable third-party sources form the backbone of a Wikipedia article, and without them it is difficult not only to show notability, but also to find verifiable encyclopedic information to add. I wonder if it'd be okay to create a new section at The Piano Guys detailing who each member is and their accomplishments. I'd imagine that may work out better. Mz7 (talk) 04:40, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Hi Mz7! Thanks, I'll try that out. Pianoguysfan talktome 08:49, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Hi Mz7! I've tried out what you suggested and it's kind of finished. It's in my sandbox. Could you tell me if it's ok or if I should get rid of some irrelevant stuff? Thanks a lot anyway for your time. Pianoguysfan talktome 08:12, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Looks good! I would shift a few of the inline citations so that all of the information is clearly referenced to a reliable source, especially since much of your proposed additions deal with information about living people. At first glance, it looks like the sections for Al van der Beek and Paul Anderson are poorly sourced, when instead you pulled most of the content from and . Duplicate those citations throughout the article so that all of the information is covered. Mz7 (talk) 18:36, 7 May 2017 (UTC)

Thanks Mz7! I'll do that tomorrow and then I'll move it to The Piano Guys page Pianoguysfan talktome 20:58, 7 May 2017 (UTC)

A page you started (Christmas Together) has been reviewed!
Thanks for creating Christmas Together, Pianoguysfan!

Wikipedia editor Boleyn just reviewed your page, and wrote this note for you:

"Thanks for creating this. I just changed it to 1 blue link per line (see WP:DDD and moved the partila match to 'see also'."

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Boleyn (talk) 20:06, 23 November 2017 (UTC)

My Reply
Thanks! TPGfan Let's have a nice cup of tea and a friendly chat  18:43, 24 November 2017 (UTC)