User talk:MikeWillRap

Kaplan university
welcome to Wikipedia! I recommend New contributors' help page to help you get up to speed here. Also, please take a look at other universities and businesses to see how their opening paragraphs are structured. The opening now back at the Kaplan University article defines exactly what it is. Your complete rewrite of the opening section really didn't benefit the article, it just made it sound more 'fluffy' while also making it less accurate, a common mistake new editors make. Try taking smaller bites. Cheers! --averagejoe (talk) 19:05, 10 July 2009 (UTC)