User talk:Mikemedina1/sandbox

Great addition to the article! There are a few ways the content can be improved. Firstly, the "as oppose" correct form is as "opposed", so that needs to be changed. Furthermore, there is a repetition with the words "this in itself", which makes part of the content seem redundant. I would also change "causes a variety of harmful substances" to "causes various harmful substances" as the latter flows better. I'd also like to point out that the bombs used in the 9/11 attacks aren't the same bombs used when imploding a building; thus, the statements and evidence used which reference 9/11 needs to be revised. Lastly, I didn't see any sources or statements which actually supported or proved deconstruction is safer. --Captainmarc15 (talk) 13:27, 2 December 2020 (UTC)