User talk:Mikin83/Johnny's West

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

You have done some very impressive work. You are well-positioned to make a significant contribution to public knowledge of this topic. Bravo!

That said, you might find it helpful to compare your approach to a high-quality article like BTS -- one difference I notice is that the BTS article tends to have paragraphs that weave the information into a more narrative form, rather than tables or lists of information. To be clear, your work is great -- but I wanted to give you an example to think about to help you make it even better.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 19:47, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi Kaylea, Thanks for the feedback! I will continue to improve the article :) Mikin83 (talk) 22:00, 27 January 2022 (UTC).

Go-Live Approval
Hi!

I think you should make this article live when you're ready. Reminder of our go-live steps....


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Celebrate!

This is a big article, so take your time with the merger. Great work! Kaylea Champion (talk) 22:27, 5 February 2022 (UTC)