User talk:Milanarya1

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Hello, Milanarya1, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Elysia and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Ameen's Peer Review
Very nice work! The information is clear and well-communicated. I would, however, recommend consolidating some of the information to create fewer sections. This layout is nice, but I could picture a lead that consolidates and restructures both the "Etymology and name" and "Origin and distribution" sections. Both of those sections present broad information that leads the reader in before getting to the minute details. Also, I'm not sure that the word "etymology" should be used, since I think that refers to word derivation rather than species identification.

"Behavior" and "Sociality" can also be merged. Moreover, in "Behavior" you mention "native plants" - native to where? You mention that they have a pretty wide distribution, so it may be good to include where those plants are found.

Overall, you do a good job of presenting a lot of information clearly and coherently. I look forward to seeing your final draft! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ameenlotfi (talk • contribs) 19:18, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

April 2019
Hello, I'm BlackcurrantTea. Thank you for expanding Augochlorella! It's far more informative now.

I wanted to let you know that I removed a couple of your references because they were to Wikipedia pages. It may sound odd, but Wikipedia doesn't consider itself a reliable source. This actually makes sense: Otherwise I could edit the Empire State Building article to say that the building was actually a giant space alien, then change the New York City article to quote it. What you can do instead is look at the references those Wikipedia articles use, then cite the references directly.

I hope you enjoy editing Wikipedia and decide to stay once your class ends. If you have any questions, you can ask me here on your talk page; I'll keep it on my watchlist for a bit. Happy editing! BlackcurrantTea (talk) 09:40, 21 April 2019 (UTC)