User talk:MilesShriv/Multiplayer video game

Post-Wiki Mini Reflection
Sadly, I am writing under these circumstances, because my edits were reverted. I had previously written this, but due to a lack of citations, initially, I only posted half of my edits. These edits were mostly changes to grammar, and phrasing, with one additional sentence added. When I checked back, all of my changes were reverted with the explanation being, that the information was unsourced with no comment to the reverting of my grammatical changes. I took these thoughts to heart, and resubmitted my original edits along with new citations. I also expanded upon my older edits, creating two new sections titled "Online multiplayer landmarks" and "multiplayer tournaments" Each of these sections also included citations but were quickly reverted as well. At this point, I am unsure if I will re-edit my content to try and repost again, I may just move on to a new article.

Peer Review Feedback Response
I found my peer review to be super helpful! It gave me a really good baseline for what I need to do and complete before we wrap up this project. Some of my main points of interest/things I have to do are as follows:

-Add Citations!!!

This one is super important, I kind of just drafted out some information without finding exact citations. Even though I already have sources compiled, I would like to find some more. However, I do have some additional question, so I plan to talk to Dr. Shaw after class.

-Write more neutrally

I really have to revise my writing and make it sound more neutral, I think this will make it more likely that my edits will be approved by the community. I think it will also improve the professionalism and clarity of my writing.

-Add Media

This will help to improve the aesthetics of my writing and article.

-Add in titles of prior edits and combine older sections

I plan to do this directly after posting this on my talk page! MilesShriv (talk) 23:06, 27 November 2023 (UTC)