User talk:Milessilber/Sepiidae

Hey Miles!

I really like what you have so far for your article, it is well-organized and I like the images you've already incorporated. I have just a few edits/ concerns for your first draft:

1. Are you planning to cite your sources for the written portion as well as the images soon? I would go ahead and rewatch some of the citation wiki tutorials and get started on your reference section because they have some really great tools that make in-text citations and building a reference list super easy. I'd hate for you to have to go back and remember where you got everything from source-wise a month from now. Related to that, where did you retrieve your images from? Have you contacted the owners of those images if they were owned/copyrighted in any way?

2. Reproduction section - Your sentences are a little long, you might want to break some of those thoughts up into smaller chunks. For example, the sperm displacement sentence is pretty wordy. There is also a typo in that section: arrangment -> arrangement.

3. Diet section - vary -> varies. Also, don't be afraid of commas. Some of the sentences in this article are begging for them. One example in this section in particular is the 2nd sentence after "habitats".

4. I would love an overview of the Kingdom, Phylum, Class, Order, etc. in the lead to really give an idea of where this family falls. It is present in many other Wiki articles and absent from yours, so it will help streamline things and give readers important context.

Kdirr2023 (talk) 19:47, 15 March 2022 (UTC)