User talk:Miller5108/sandbox

This is an interesting topic. I've never really thought much about the value of a bed before. These articles sound like they discuss an interesting history of the bed. I think that there needs to be more analysis of the topic, especially in the assessment of each article. Further reading should be formatted as a list to make it easier to read. Good job! Marenhalliday (talk) 13:35, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

The use of headings in your article were helpful for reading and establishing organization. I felt that there could be more information included in a couple of the sections to help clarify the topic and conclusion. It is not clear what your 'formal question' is. I enjoyed your topic. (72.136.0.60 (talk) 17:42, 22 November 2013 (UTC))