User talk:Milo1020

Hiya, Milo1020!
Howdy, Milo1020. I'm Theo, your Online Ambassador for the New Media Technology and Communication online Wikipedia course, and I'll be here to help if you run into any problems. I've left a welcome message here that has some useful info, including my email address. Give it a look, and let me know if you need anything! — Theopolisme   ( talk )  12:19, 5 February 2013 (UTC)

Feedback on your work
Good development of original stub content.

Consider making the following changes: Mgantony (talk) 17:15, 4 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Add source citation: "dates back to 1909 when Ray Newby of California made his debut for Herrold College of Engineering and Wireless"
 * Consider developing Types of Radio Jockeys into sub-sections,e ach with its own heading...
 * ...Then move Notble Radio Jockeys to the relevant sub-section
 * Format for readability: "For 1-4 years it's $15,200-39,400, 5-9 $20,600-41,700, 10-19 $23,200-51,200, and 20 or more years $26,300-73,000"
 * Include source citation: "only large corporate houses participate in the medium"
 * Last 3 References are not formatted per Wikipedia guidelines. Please fix.

Greetings and Suggestion
Greetings from Conner Baldwin (Campus Ambassador (In Training). To get used to sub-sections, Make an outline in Word using the Outline View.  You'll gain a concept of main ideas versus secondary concepts belonging to a specific section.

Yjx2ic35 (talk)Yjx2ic35 —Preceding undated comment added 16:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

Feedback
Good development since the last assessment. Here is some feedback on your progress: Mgantony (talk) 14:46, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Consider capitalizing all section headings. E.g., "Talk radio jockeys," "Sports radio jockeys" etc.
 * Jockeys is consistently misspelled - "jockeys" is plural, "jockey's" is possessive
 * Fix spelling: "a person must got through"
 * Consider hyperlinking these terms to their respective Wikipedia entries: radio broadcasting, audio engineering,
 * The last 5 references do not follow Wikipedia guidelines. Please fix this.

Good job!
Good job on developing the original stub! Mgantony (talk) 23:27, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

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