User talk:Mimabe06/The Snowy Day

Peer review on The Snowy Day article
Good clarity in the lead, identifying Keats race and focusing of the notable content of the book. Shifting some of the supporting content from the original lead to your Subject categories was a great choice. The revision feels much more deliberate with information about the book having more prominence over information about the author.

The headings provide a clear picture of the origins and impact of The Snowy Day. There is significant expansion of relevant information that’s properly supported with frequent citations. For a moment I was thrown seeing a citation for Amazon!

Another improvement for the headings is your choice of words. The change from Critical Reception to Impact allowed you to give a broader context to the effects The Snowy Day had.

The end of the Impact section does reference Little Black Sambo specifically which I’m not sure is necessary. If it is included, that’s a good place for a link to the Wikipedia article so readers can explore that broader context.

I also wonder if it’s possible to explore the text of the book more under the History heading. The original article mentions Keats love of Haiku as a possible influence, but if that isn’t verifiable, some other information about the writing could be interesting to include.

Wonderful improvements! Scottdirkb (talk) 19:49, 17 November 2019 (UTC)ScottDirkB