User talk:Minchillio

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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Hal9000w (talk) 06:30, 20 February 2013 (UTC)


 * This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.


 * This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopaedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms, that are designed to promote or show-off the subject.


 * This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the [[WP:guide to writing better articles|guide to writing better articles}} for information on how to better format your submission.

Please note that if the issues are not fixed, the draft will be rejected again. Hal9000w (talk) 06:30, 20 February 2013 (UTC)