User talk:Mindimine/sandbox

Hi Mindimine, I totally agree with your argument, sentences like the one you cited are unbias and are the reason why the article has been labeled as unbalanced. However, I believe that you could use some of the information you have acquired through your peer-reviewed article to contribute to the Atkins diet article. For example, using some of your sources to suggest a change where you use unbias facts to replace those sentences that have been labeled as unbias. I also encourage you to organize your sandbox a little bit so the users that want to see your suggestions for the page can clearly see your points.