User talk:Minedramamine

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tyler Clark Burke (January 21)
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Girth Summit  (blether) 23:15, 21 January 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tyler Clark Burke (February 13)
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Barkeep49 (talk) 23:03, 13 February 2020 (UTC)

Tyler Clark Burke
Hi there, as promised I've taken a look through. I think this is looking a lot more like a publishable article, but there are a few steps you could take to tidy it up a bit.
 * Early life - there's a lot here about her family members, rather than her. Why does the reader need to know about her grandfather's autobiography, or the details of her great uncle's acting career? I'd advise trimming this substantially - just say that she is the grand daughter of judge Adrian P. Burke, and grand niece of the actor James Burke - the links to their articles will allow the reader to find out more about them.
 * I'd advise you to go through it one last time and cut anything that looks like promo. Something might be factually accurate, but still strike the wrong tone. Examples:
 * She also began working with Grammy-nominated and Juno award-winning musician Feist in 1998,
 * , Burke hosted various popular art-dance-music parties,
 * she hosted popular miracle fruit tasting parties
 * Minor copyediting tips - remove the spaces between the references, and the double carriage returns between the paragraphs in the early life section (which will probably trim down to one paragraph if you follow my suggestions). Cheers Girth Summit  (blether)  14:58, 3 May 2020 (UTC)

Thank you so much. I am also sorry you’ve had to spend so much time with this. I appreciate your thoroughness. Minedramamine (talk) 23:35, 4 May 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tyler Clark Burke has been accepted
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Thanks again, and happy editing! MapleSoy (talk) 00:52, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

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