User talk:Mingrzh

Welcome!
Hello, Mingrzh, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: The Shanghai EDITION (April 27)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Kirbanzo were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The Shanghai EDITION and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Kirbanzo (talk - contribs) 00:01, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of The Shanghai EDITION


A tag has been placed on The Shanghai EDITION, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. Fram (talk) 08:00, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Deb. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted; Wikipedia articles should be written objectively, using independent sources, and from a neutral perspective. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you.

Next time, create your article using Articles for creation, then there's less danger of it being speedy deleted. Don't ever move something you've created into article space without waiting for it to pass an independent review. Deb (talk) 08:02, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of The Shanghai EDITION


A tag has been placed on The Shanghai EDITION, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. 49ersBelongInSanFrancisco (talk) 05:34, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Your draft
I moved your draft to User:Mingrzh/The Shanghai EDITION because it isn't ready for mainspace yet. There are a few things that you need to do before this is ready for mainspace Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:57, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Right now, you're mostly using the hotel's website as a source. You need to rely primarily on reliable sources that are independent of the hotel itself - ideally, scholarly sources or news sources that have an editorial board and a reputation for fact-checking. To establish notability, you'll need three sources that provide in-depth coverage.
 * Your current tone is too promotional. You need to write in an encyclopedic style. I recommend you take a look at this list of Good Articles and look at some of the ones about hotels. They should give you a sense of the style and tone you should be aiming for.