User talk:Mintimuu/sandbox/Vertumnus

You have selected a great topic. One might consider this portrait to be nothing but a joke, but you have the start to show why it is no joke and should be seriously considered. You can show why Rudolf II and Arcimboldo were such good friends and why Rudolf was happy with the painting.

Discussion of the alchemical aspects of the time of Rudolf II will add a new dimension to your article.

I looked at your sources numbered 3 and 4. The information in source 4 was not included in the paragraph in your text for which it was a reference but could be. I tried to access your reference 8 but had to log into the Sacramento State library to do so. Can you make it so one does not need rights at Sacramento State to read it?

Your discussion was neutral without a particular point of view. When you have added text to fill out the sections you have listed your article should show why this unusual portrait should be admired.

Markwhite01 (talk) 15:59, 19 October 2020 (UTC)