User talk:Minu1208

Welcome!
Hello, Minu1208, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hi! I was assigned to peer review your article for our Humanities Wiki Project. However when I click to view your sandbox draft there is nothing there. Is there anywhere else you did your edits and if so could you please send me the link so I may peer review it? Thank you :) Niese05 (talk) 18:47, 22 October 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review 10/23/22
Hello Minu1208

Here is my peer review:

Lead


 * No the lead has no been updated to reflect the new content added.
 * No the Lead does not include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic.
 * No the lead does not include a brief description of the article's major sections.
 * No the Lead does not include information that is not present in the article.
 * There is no lead.

Content


 * No content was added to the article.

Tone and Balance


 * Editor has not made any changes.

Sources


 * No sources were listed for this article.

Organization


 * No content is written by the editor

Images and Media


 * No images or media was added additionally.

Additional Feedback: I'm sure once you start editing the article will come together smoothly. I wish you luck in your edits and I hope we'll get to see them soon! Niese05 (talk) 04:18, 24 October 2022 (UTC)